Friday, February 17, 2006

Cry Of The Ghetto Comments

Rating: 4.5

The baby cries
As a bullet comes through the window
As the father slowly dies
Whiile the mother doesn't react
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Tequia Taylor
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Christian Eliab Ratnam 17 February 2006

Beautiful! Message brought across well, poetic essence could be felt! Great write! ! !

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