Born into tradition,
generation gone by.
Mind of condition,
about to defy.
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the way you wrote this was straight-forward, not over-complicated with too much fancy poetic techniques, yet you still used perfect amount of poetic communication to convey this timeless message. Thank you for sharing this! ! I give the poem and objective 8, and a subjective 11 on the 1-10 scale! !
I've just read this poem and it really resonated with me. I am at a loss to know how anyone could kill, as you have described and for those reasons, such a beautiful and intelligent creature.