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Very rich concept...

ctually all innocences are guilty in most of others' eyes...

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

Icy reactions, love lost Virtuous dew, dear poet Falls on the grass every day Sparkling rays only momentary Striking day light dries out the moisture. Cries of Innocence forms a cloudy day Only the down pour washes away... the mist. Good read. Re-read. So much is still there is underdstand...

it was a pleasure reading your poem..............10

I won't regret my crying from now on as I have read this poem of yours.....Nice n very very nicely written.10+

sparkling dew cries over blade of grass redeeming slowly by rays golden mystery shrouds over green of garden as dawn remembers art of last night ------- i loved the soft touching mood you have set here sir...Great flow of words woven with fantastic rhymes and diction.....10/10

cry of innocence so vivid in your words with depth brain storming... uncertain, vagueness still shadowing the dreams.. though seems dead but continue to crawl back to dreams the gleams of love streams..... really a very great write... as always.....showered us with this deep words yet pictured out vividly the thoughts of it... thanks for sharing.... 10++++ lovelots, maia