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Great poem, love the use of words, i have some more poetry posted, please read when you have time, thanks

VERy well written this is such a beautiful poem couldn't help of writting a comment when i read this.. excellent us of words *.*

i completely enjoyed this poem decisional in between natural beauties and nature related changes......i hope you will go on with

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

I Loved This Poem... The Beauty of the Words brings Sublime Imagery... I like the way you speak it, Tell its own Story - Nature, Time, Love, etc.... MoonBee

Swimming in the sea of sadness yet soaring in the sky of significance. Well done my friend.

deep, wise and beautiful...enjoying always your unique style sparkling dew cries over blade of grass redeeming slowly by rays golden mystery shrouds over green of garden as dawn remembers art of last night query riffles by nature of resonance precision happens to happen by bliss sweetness refluxes by newness of world soul awes by eclectic cry of innocence joy resounds mingling into spumes in void quest lays back into eternity by askance is there love lost to reason of murky ravine? as beauty of grace reels up by dreams onshore soul knows truth of trust by reason implicit greenness smooches by eyes of grin surmised heart yet needs warmth of love by craving moment when chilled by snow in indulgence

don't cry anymore, this is a sad poem

good job...I love it 10

a masterpiece..well expressed 10

A profound write with some nice expressions as well.

Its how you painted the nature in your own words, superb its excellent! Go on writing its like pleasure reading your poems.

Ooooh! I just loved this your wizdom on your point of view in your thought is amazing! The exampled cresents of which you right shows that we all see things in unique and seperate. If we didn't we would never have grand write though or conversation. If we all see it the same only one of us can really see. The leader on this Earth know this I am not talking about the Pharoah or the president or the Emporer. I am talking about those that understand and listen where listening is needed and talking when talking is needed. You show the mind of all of us perfection. Yet another for the favorites in my collection of loved poems. Zachary Clark,

Sincere flow of candid thoughts undeniably founded in profound wisdom being a poet you have surmised the truth has expressed the intuition of the human mind every sentiment quite real and explicitly written none else so ardent and instinctively clever doing poetry with much passion and zeal until the end of time please do share

The sun rises each day on a different world, changes happen constantly; there is a lot of beauty in your poem, you are so right dawns tear do sparkle in the change from night to day. I like the Cry of Innocence...it pictures natural life quite beautifully. Thank you

Thsi poem screams attention. Nice work

'''yet moment makes history in ages and eons embracing breaths of love and hatred entwined'' It is a descriptive poem of color in which the purity is very accurate shown.Nature is used for comparison, and the nature of the painting is wonderful, with great power of suggestion.10+++

oh great composition! Bold and beautiful.........thoughtful! ....10+

wonderful poem sadly said, filed by images from longing soul were shed..

enlighten soul by divine glory of love sanguine as quest dies then there by the rain sizzling like bubbles of queries mingling into obscurity. wow...what a thought process...liked it...10++