Friday, June 27, 2014

Cry Of Hills And Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day was fearful, sleep-less is the night,
Energy crisis has blackened the streets,
Terror is prevailing and there is no light,
Children are crying and forgotten their tweets.
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Khalida Bano Ali 07 January 2015

A thoughtful poem..................10

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Neela Nath Das 28 June 2014

Enjoy your killings, celebrate your blast, Tomorrow your body will be watched unconcerned. - - - - - -Very true.Karma will pay back them.

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Valsa George 28 June 2014

This is a fantastic write Akhtarji..... I see violence in its gruesome form here.... Those who have ears, let they hear this warning....(lament) The stars are shining like all other days, The moon is bathing in the moonlit flood, The sun will rise and disperse its rays, It will set, unconcerned, in the lake of blood. Enjoyed these lines.....Nature will be unconcerned about man's misdeeds that invite his own destruction!

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 June 2014

Beautiful poem. You have portrayed it beautifully. Very true said, no one is at peace nor safe...Thanks for sharing with us.

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V P Mahur 27 June 2014

Dear Bro, What a painful and live description you have given. The worst reality of some unfortunate raw youths. Thanks for this living picture and also to your comments. It is all your love and inspiration that I happens to write something.

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Salini Nair 27 June 2014

great reminder of terrorism...great...like it

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