Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Cry Of Beast Comments

Rating: 5.0

The winter is so long
Cave is so dark
So cold
The howl is so load
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 June 2013

good poem thanks for sharing

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Wahab Abdul 05 June 2013

Who cry ... should it not be who cries? however the poem ends in a chocolate bomb...boom! ! great poem, perfect ten.....

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Yasmin Khan 05 June 2013

We move in a maddening crowd and want want some niche for comfort.You have expressed your feelings in short sentences quite well.

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