Friday, October 26, 2012

Cry Of A Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the dimly lit corridors of the hospital
lurked a malefic figure-
restless fidgety in the grip of passion.
Unmindful of the eerie environ
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Om Chawla
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

She is in coma as doctors announce. This provokes thought and brings sadness. We can only pray and send best wishes. God grants healing. This is excellently penned emotional poem...10

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Patricia Grantham 03 December 2013

A very powerful and eye opening write. A soul degraded by vicious acts of violence. Can one so fragile ever regain a sense of being? Sham and shame two degrading words. Very well put together Om.

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Archana Kumar 21 June 2013

very touching, full of compassion...brought tears to my eyes

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Archana Kumar 21 June 2013

very touching, sad but full of compassion....brought tears to my eyes...Archana

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Dinesan Madathil 20 June 2013

The poem calls for emergence of a wider justice. The tale narrated is soaked in tears and emanates the odour of depletion of true values. Dear Chawla sir, here, your poem expresses a concern on behalf of all of us.

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Elena Sandu 20 December 2012

What a sad story! I have found only now who is Aruna Shanbaugh, my eyes also are full of tears. Quite a strong message, thank you!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 31 October 2012

I see you have the great compassion, but life is much more then this. Never stop searching for more.

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Valsa George 30 October 2012

The death in life of this debilitated victim of a callous savage's heinous act evokes horror and pity! A very powerful write! !

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Anita Sehgal 30 October 2012

so appropriately voiced on her behalf... a very sad and tragic incident... how can one ever right such an horrendous wrong done to her..

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Valerie Dohren 28 October 2012

Wow, a very powerful and emotive e write. A great read Om.

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