They built a dam at past.
That was called farakka.
They never think of me, us.
We are drying day by day.
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a befitting cry from the scarred and mangeled body of mother earth... we hear long lectures on sustainability and environ impact and fancy terminology.....which in the end comes to naught... great idea convept and visualisation...nice poem cheers
love of nature and love of country indeed! nationaistic of you, that's nice.. good one :) 10
A nice poem with a great idea. You have feel the sorrow of the rivers in our country. It's message has universal appeal.10+++
this condition of the rivers is not the only problem of Bangladesh but also the world over.good that we poets realise this and bring about the enlightinment.good write thanks
I liked your way of expressing.....10 for your message...Brishti...
the expressions of a river is revealed in dis piece.. ya it's a big loss to humans..nice penned..
Wow, brilliant write, Written from the point of view of a river, Its very unique, the flow of your poem is smooth, and all u have is one humble request 'Let me be a river', , , I loved it thanks for sharing!
They built a dam at past. That was called farakka. They never think of me, us. We are drying day by day. Water levels are going down. let me live is cry from river.. what an fantastic idea from poet.. i liked it....10 read mine don't kill me... global warming.. miss i miss u