Monday, December 7, 2009

'Cry Of A Kid' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before I raise
you get ready;
Before my School bus arrives
you leave to office leaving my lunch box;
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Annie Juliet
COMMENTS
Bharati Nayak 17 May 2023

The hard realities a child faces when his mother is a working mum.He misses her very much.The mum must be feeling sameway.She may be feeling guilty to leave the child in baby sitter's care.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 September 2017

A very impressive poem the reader feels this poem.

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Rajnish Manga 29 March 2017

This is very common these days that the working parents have no time for their young children but they miss their mothers more than anybody else in the family, leave aside a baby sitter. You have rightly pointed out: : ....I some time wish, why wont I be / this baby sitter's child;

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 March 2016

You are so happy about my achievement boost before every one 'that is my child! ! ! ! ' When will you be achieve my love for me to boost 'That's my BEST MOM' it is the reality of modern life when the parents are busy making money. thank you for writing about such a theme. tony

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V P Mahur 07 March 2014

Dear Annie Sweet feels of a baby this the doom of so many children in the modern world. I invite you to read my poems and give your views Thanks!

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Aditi Khandelwal 27 July 2012

Good poem... there are some typing errors if you correct it the poem will be great.... Really nice poem.. Aditi

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Deep Mukherjee 06 June 2012

There is pain, obligation and sustained feeling of quest of love in the poem............good one! ! !

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Ency Bearis 16 December 2009

a good tribute for the mother....a substantial one....10

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