Wednesday, October 7, 2015

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Rating: 5.0

Pretty Pink Striped Trumpets
Green foliage nesting floret stem
A promise of foursome sung
Thus began we an affaire 'de couer'
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Seema Jayaraman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

Groovy depiction. Thrilling expression. A stunning poem that touches the heart. .......10

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Seema Jayaraman 08 October 2015

Thank you Kumarmaniji, for sparing your time to review my lines... I am inundated with dreams of flowers, their vibrant colors and liveliness and them wanting me to pen their stories.. glad you liked this one. I have spewed a spate of haiku's request your view and guidance for them. thanks

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