Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, April 16, 2009

Cry Not Comments

Rating: 4.8

You should not cry else tears may fall
Hold them back until, you make call
you tell them not to fall or roll
is the cry only way left for recall?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Paresh Chakra 07 December 2018

See the reason and decide for and against it is real submission that will be counted for as test, what happens if you simply go for admission, it is a very beautiful stanga There may still be omission and emission,

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Alen Alexander 24 March 2010

sad, but i guess though provoking to some, makes you think twice. strong words and expressions. good one!

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Abby Keen/harris 13 February 2010

its a great poem i liked it alot! keep going :)

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Marcella D 16 January 2010

that was so sad: (good poetry

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Demon lover 15 January 2010

its beautifully sad but also very good

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Cry not, tears may fall hold them back, until, You tell them to role is the cry the only way left? ... Great words my friend. Well done!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 October 2009

But I’ll cry and fry me for pains of others but not for me. Ok Sir. A poem gives us Abhi [fearlessness] Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

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Catrina Heart 20 September 2009

Cry not my friend you have a heart golden Cry not my pal you have a soul clear as river Cry not my peer you have a mind so beautiful Like diamond, with a sapphire eye, ruby tower to lean on..............Lovely poem! ! ! 10.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 18 September 2009

Like crying in the rain no one can see your pain...your tears and fears...but they are there...as you are there...shout not at thee but at me...love goes full circle...thats perfect...a perfect 360 circle...you have said the best of your words...

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Sunita Rao 17 September 2009

Cry not, tears may fall, hold them back, until, You tell them to roll, is the cry only way left?

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Twinkle Vohra 17 September 2009

Cry not, tears may fall, hold them back, until, You tell them to roll, is the cry only way left?

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Sagarika Shah 17 September 2009

Go to the roof top, yel as much as u can, go to the hill top,

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Sachin Goswami 17 September 2009

Cry not, tears may fall, hold them back, until, You tell them to roll, is the cry only way left?

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K.v. Subbarao 08 September 2009

Cry in open or complain, May bring digrace to her, .........10

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Venkat Ramanna 08 September 2009

it is very good poem....10

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Sadia Hussain 08 September 2009

Go to the roof top, yel as much as u can, go to the hill top, Shout in wilderness,

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Ramdulari Sinha 03 September 2009

Cry not, tears may fall, hold them back, until, You tell them to roll, is the cry only way left? ....10

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Severina Dsouza 18 August 2009

u should not cry in open...10

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Ashley Paul 16 August 2009

it will bringshameand discredit...10

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Chetna Purohit 15 August 2009

cry not else it will bring shame on u....10

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