Cry My Tears Cry Comments

This is a wonderful poem

Wow! Sad emotional feelings are overflowing in this elegy poem... excellent

I always refer to this poem when the storm of love hits... I love this poem, contains lots of meaningful thoughts

Your beautiful thoughts and feelings are overflowing in this marvelous write. The opening stanza is very moving. And the closure is just amazing. A great piece of work.10

wow the poem is crafted excellently - like to quote - I flee 100 000 light-years To God of the celestial spheres, Ar empresta mim seu vista To x-ray the heart of an Earthly angel, Insight with her, I neva honestly honered ...O love come hither hither I am alone All me have gone just a figure of bone without marrow boon come hither o love and erase the tears of heart I am but none without your touch great 10++++

Who will bandage My gaping wounds? How will I face This lonely world alone? Wiping the tears of All man-made orphans? My eyes are wet, that's the wonder of this great poem.

Superb! I liked the personification of 'cry' most! I love reading this form of poetry (Elegy) which normally carries loads of emotions! You may like to read my poem entitled 'Elegy: A Dead Public Pond'. I vote this splendid piece of art with a 10! Loved reading your poems my friend!

The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Lungelo.

Emotions, emotionally well written, Lungelo...you are a star in the making

Oh! Cry my love cry... never last! treated her like a scrap of paper.. trees of our bondage; Like a grave in the sepulchre Who will bandage My gaping wounds? a beautiful poem full of Penitance.. thinking of the past and crying before the Lord.. feeling lonely in this world of human beings........ thank u very much dear poet for this expressive poem.. very fine in words and imagination.. thank u. tony

Beautifully articulated poem....full of emotions are expressed here, ...

This lonely world alone! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I flee 100 000 light-years To God of the celestial spheres, great write, thanks for sharing the with us

Such a brilliant write, Lungelo.....

Poems remind about duty and responsibility through crying of knowledge. This excellently penned poem makes a reader very emotional. An amazing and excellent poem is wisely drafted...10