Friday, September 2, 2016

Cry Me A World Comments

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Cry Me A World

Cry me a world were all war is done
where peace has returned and life has begun.
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Annette Aitken
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Terry Craddock 12 September 2016

Cry me a world is a beautiful theme, I especially liked, 'Cry me a world were no sleepless nights exist wake up refreshed start the day with a kiss. Cry me a world where love conquers all when true words are spoken by one by all.' beautiful

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 September 2016

This is the wish of everyone who need peace to live a happy life.War brings devastation. loss and pain. Hope your wish is fulfilled soon.Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Billsborough 04 September 2016

Yes, it has the feel of a song for the Peace movement. You are coming on by leaps and bounds, Annette. A voice worth listening to.

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Susan Williams 03 September 2016

Charming and full of love. I think it would be a great song a la John Lennon's Imagine. Well done.

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Perry Biggerstaff 03 September 2016

Love the sentiment and the obvious tenderness. Well done, I will be checking back for more of your poetry.

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B.m. Biswas 02 September 2016

we all hope...... .......some day we all believe the days to came....... God bless you...

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Christopher Tye 02 September 2016

Really wonderful poem, your best work yet. If only we could get your sentiments realized in our troubled and unequal world.

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