Saturday, July 9, 2016

Cry Foul Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cried when I saw the killing
And I couldn't stop the tearing
I weep for the loss of a being
And for such horrendous policing
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Richard Wlodarski
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 April 2017

Cold blood! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 27 April 2017

Edward, it's hard to believe that a cold blood killing could be at the hands of a cop. To serve and protect? ? ?

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Chinedu Dike 29 March 2017

It's a heart touching sad story expertly narrated in a great poem. A confronting piece depicting savagery. Piece be onto good men like you.

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Richard Wlodarski 27 April 2017

Thank you so much, Chinedu for your very kind words. For your very positive feedback. And for the big 10. I'd like to read some more of your poetry.

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