Sunday, August 2, 2009

Cry For You (From My Mind) Comments

Rating: 3.7

So picture perfect
But in motion things become blurry
I would cry if the world would stop for me
Just for that one moment to see the why, and why not
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Marieta Maglas 02 August 2009

''I watch flowers blossom when I stare into her eyes So angel like and delicate yet so fierce All the physical power in my beings Useless against her strength imprisoning my heart'' nice combination between simile and visual, cognitive metaphor, wonderful feelings....lovely to read......10

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