Monday, August 19, 2013

Cry For The World Comments

Rating: 4.9

In a world
that's lost it's soul
in a world
that's breaking down
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 25 September 2013

the world needs to be cried for. good write

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Alookh (matin) 14 September 2013

mmmmmm......u are right! ! ! ! .....poor the world! ! !

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Lorraine Colon 22 August 2013

The evil-doers are not crying. They are taking action - so must we. Crying comes naturally when we see the state the world is in, but it accomplishes nothing - just makes us feel better for awhile. But nothing changes. Oh, you got me going here, Dave. See how powerful your words are!

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David Lessard 22 August 2013

yes, cry and pray for it. nice lines.

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Valerie Dohren 22 August 2013

The world is certainly an issue over which to cry! !

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Richard York 22 August 2013

WoW! ! Moving. Like it very much.

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Hazel Durham 21 August 2013

Cry for the world with all it's pain and suffering and no answers! Powerful write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 August 2013

We all cry for the world with no answers in sight. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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David Wood 21 August 2013

Cry for the voiceless too. A lovely write.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 20 August 2013

if only our tears can cleanse the earth!

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

Cry not for us but for the world..Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

there needs to be a lot of crying for the answers. No one seems to worry about it. good poem

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Dave Alan Walker

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