Thursday, December 28, 2006

Cry For Life Comments

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I cry for life, but no one can hear
The unending decent of my painful tears
Haunting screams shatter the blackness of night
While a breaking heart bleeds with no end in sight
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Matt Mondschein
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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

Awesome write....... So sad, so sad it is. The pain that follows us, it never goes away, for some way in life we began to act or show signs of what our beginning has done to us and made us afraid to love, or to even believe that we can or that we are unlovable. People say let go of the past, it isn't that easy. What I have come to realize now is that a lot of my life has been spent living to the tune of other people's needs and wants and fixing everything. I haven't been living in all these 46 years....I have been reacting. Falling in love with always the wrong men, because I don't know or still looking for love that I never received. Pain, a cry for life, you describe well. It is a cry for life, a cry to be loved, to be understood, to understand who you are, and when will you live, really live. Thanks for sharing.....take care. You are a very good writer.....

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