Monday, April 14, 2008

Cry For Help Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did you forget me?
Did you overlook my crying heart
as it tried to reach out in the dark;
tentatively it stretched out one hand
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David Taylor
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Mamta Agarwal 25 April 2008

a silent cry of a tortured soul. trying to reach out. how many times in trying times we want to reach out, but rarely someone hears our silent cry for help.truly poignant

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Gently, murmuringly, flowingly put with a message that rings like the loudest of heartbeats on a monitor.... wonderfully touching and, if autobiographical, I sure hope it worked. t x

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Malini Kadir 14 April 2008

Oh love it came through loud and clear......and touched a thousand hearts To fill your day with messages to enrich your poetic heart with a dash of chivalry's Touch in even a gentle man's heart I see.here.........................

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Original Unknown Girl 14 April 2008

Oh David, I heard it allright, no need for voice when words are displayed like this. Surely the message got through? Here's hoping. HG: -) xx

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David Harris 14 April 2008

David, a heartfelt pea here. I'm sure whomever it was intended for heard it my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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