Monday, July 29, 2013

Cry For Help! Comments

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Am a shining precious diamond
To protect me
From the fiery and Prying eyes
My mom covered me with
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Geetha Jayakumar
mom
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2018

A brilliant poem with beautiful message having touching expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 September 2014

A very sensitive subject scripted poignantly.......Geetha.....though children should be protected from every evil possibly and at the same time they should not be overprotected rather be left to be independent.........very well composed

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Valsa George 30 July 2013

Too much of care and protection from the part of parents can often leave children quite ineffectual! They should be taught the art of standing on their own feet; otherwise, once when the parents leave, they will stay puzzled before the harsh realities of life! A very relevant theme, you have chosen and presented it well!

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David Wood 29 July 2013

We all have a love and duty to protect our children from harm or perceived harm and wrap them in cotton wool. A lovely poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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