Thursday, September 13, 2012

Cry For Education Comments

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All of them are running after you.
i can't because i don't have money.
My parents cannot provide me with a penny.
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jalloh Alusine
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Jefferson Carter 15 September 2012

J, my advice is to stop writing right now. Give your ego a rest and start reading good contemporary poets. There are numerous anthologies you might enjoy. As you read, you'll be learning, not so much how to copy but what's possible, and your poetry will improve after some deep immersion in the works. Nothing in, nothing out, that's a truth you need to believe. JC

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