Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Cry Beautiful Comments

Rating: 4.9

Tears are falling,
From beautiful eyes.
Tears are falling,
Because of beautiful lies.
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Summer Sandercox
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 21 October 2018

Excellent! Thanks for sharing.+10

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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2017

This poem is an extraordinary example of how the repetition of a word can be extremely effective. The word beautiful culminated in a death. An ingenious poem. Excellent, Summer!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 04 February 2015

Those who lie must cry yet love is like a rose with thorn we have to accept the truth

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Lyn Paul 04 February 2014

A lovely write Summer, it was the title that brought me to open these Beautiful words. Thank you

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Liliana ~el 04 February 2014

Great serene flow

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Tony Karas 04 February 2014

Wow! Excellent write! Those tears.... they burn tracks as they roll down. (HUGE HUG)

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Babatunde Aremu 04 February 2014

Wodo the poeterful poem full of imageries. Kudos t

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Jinny Kim 04 February 2013

This poem is so sad... and sweet...

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Jacquelyn Burge 04 February 2013

a very breathtaking, beautiful poem :)

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Hardik Vaidya 04 February 2013

As beautiful dies, how poetic, indeed a very sweet composition, sweeter than cane sugar. How well have you trapped the dying of something beautiful which in most cases is the death of a perception, a sensation a thought, an impression. It is indeed quite an enigma how great importance perceptions, and images hold in our lives and this poem so succinctly summarises it.

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Beautifully Unknown 17 December 2008

I really liked this a lot! Very beautiful just beautiful!

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Kitti Manson 25 January 2008

Wow... amazing, the last line really sealed the deal for me. It's so good.

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Violet Llewellyn 29 September 2007

I love this poem, how things that are not beautiful can be described as beautiful, and you can understand how they would be that way. -Storm (Violet)

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R R 17 July 2007

WOW thats all i can say WOW! ! loved it WOW.

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Erin B 14 May 2007

God I love this, it struck me hard, please keep writing, I'd love to see more.

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Timothy Hollandsworth 22 March 2007

Lovely. I would say more, but what more needs to be said? Just wonderful!

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Madly In Love 21 March 2007

wow this is one of my favourites keep writing

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