Tears are falling,
From beautiful eyes.
Tears are falling,
Because of beautiful lies.
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This poem is an extraordinary example of how the repetition of a word can be extremely effective. The word beautiful culminated in a death. An ingenious poem. Excellent, Summer!
Those who lie must cry yet love is like a rose with thorn we have to accept the truth
A lovely write Summer, it was the title that brought me to open these Beautiful words. Thank you
Wow! Excellent write! Those tears.... they burn tracks as they roll down. (HUGE HUG)
As beautiful dies, how poetic, indeed a very sweet composition, sweeter than cane sugar. How well have you trapped the dying of something beautiful which in most cases is the death of a perception, a sensation a thought, an impression. It is indeed quite an enigma how great importance perceptions, and images hold in our lives and this poem so succinctly summarises it.
I really liked this a lot! Very beautiful just beautiful!
Wow... amazing, the last line really sealed the deal for me. It's so good.
I love this poem, how things that are not beautiful can be described as beautiful, and you can understand how they would be that way. -Storm (Violet)
God I love this, it struck me hard, please keep writing, I'd love to see more.
Lovely. I would say more, but what more needs to be said? Just wonderful!
Excellent! Thanks for sharing.+10