Thursday, September 27, 2012

Cry Baby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cry baby cry
open your mothers eyes
don't lose your life
because of her downward slide
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Dave Alan Walker
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Guy Lip-more 06 December 2012

Short and powerful, great write as normal.

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Spiritual Seeker 05 October 2012

So sweet....I just got my first grandchild a month back! ! am missing her...a 10.

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Heather Wilson 02 October 2012

So poignant, just a few words that mean so much.

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Eric Cockrell 29 September 2012

perhaps then in the whimper of the child lies the key to the mother's heart... let us hope!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 September 2012

Though short, you have given the right to the babies! Nice!

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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