Cry A River Comments

tears are good.. they go and leave smiles most times. the second stanza.. it is too and not to. I like your poem. it flows well.

Hi Tiffany - What am I going to do with you my Angel - 'I cant control this pain inside - its far too deep - been there for a long time'. What you need is a lot of TLC - I can give you Cyber TLC and a big Cyber Cuddle - hope it helps. Pain does go deep Angel but the love of God and the prayers of those who love you go deeper. 'Forget the things which are behind - let go and let God liftyou up onto higher ground. Love you in Poetry and in the Spirit - JOHN X X