Monday, December 22, 2008

Cry 4 Her Comments

Rating: 4.5

As days go bye and tears for in my eyes,
I cry because she is not in my sight,
I want to do well but I want to fight,
Since we’ve got together,
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gary hicinbothem
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 31 December 2008

Beautiful poem. Sad though, but it prove how much you loved her, which is sweet.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 26 December 2008

This is a great poem.10+.

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

I love her I don’t care about her race, I cry every night and feel like blood running down my cheeks, Because I can not see her, you shouldnt care about her race if you love her. the blood running down your cheeks is a great image for your reader. this gets your emotion across well, very sad. good job. Becca

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