Thursday, September 10, 2015

Cry Comments

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I often wondered why I cried
Rusted love or a weary life?
Did I lie to cry or cry to lie
Cross my heart and hope to die?
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Rosmin Elsa Mohan
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David Wood 10 September 2015

A really good poem that flows very well, I like the timing and structure. Great work.

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan

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