Once upon a time,
We walked with hand in hand
Over the grazing fields,
With grins and blushes
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a beautiful write sad but well written with a lot of emotion.
Lovely poem Indranil! It truly imparts yearnings for a lost love and the heart's hollow feelings of a love that can't be replaced.
The pain of losing a love one can be devastating. Not a day goes by without thinking about it as your poem expresses. Maybe that love will be renewed again which brings to mind my poem If Ever We Meet Again. Love will come again my friend. Excellent write.
story of no return.......hmmm...an amazing write.........losing a loved one is very painful when one knows that it wont return........
I wish you all success in turning the story of no return into one of no parting! A beautiful poem!
Trying to touch your invisible shadow With my far cry And seeking to change The story of no return. beautiful write
Beautiful memories linger forever with a love that never ends and the terrible pain of losing! ! So deep with a haunting beauty! !
The nostalgia over your lost love is painful but sweet here. But I think the title can be modified a little differently.
Nice and beautiful poem.