I don't know what you've done to me.
I'm falling apart in your arms.
I want to repel you,
As I fall to pieces.
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Hmm... This is interesting... Since you said you were learning to write.. My advice is to just let it flow.. relax and let it all come to you. doesnt matter what you write.. as long as its from your heart.. :) Keep writing :)
it could inprove a we bit