Saturday, February 20, 2010

Cry Comments

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I don't know what you've done to me.
I'm falling apart in your arms.
I want to repel you,
As I fall to pieces.
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Sarah Riley
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Alex gomez 20 February 2010

it could inprove a we bit

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Dislocated Heart 20 February 2010

Hmm... This is interesting... Since you said you were learning to write.. My advice is to just let it flow.. relax and let it all come to you. doesnt matter what you write.. as long as its from your heart.. :) Keep writing :)

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