Monday, April 8, 2019

Crusted Hands Comments

Rating: 4.4

I am in beneath of the tomb
Crawling at the edge of the slimy enclosure

I can smell the disgusting creature
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Chealsey Marou
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Chealsey Marou 28 September 2021

Those comments are not actually mine. Fuck that person who hacked my account. I wasn't opening my account since 2019 after this poem got posted.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2020

To make sure that I will no longer escape from his hands So that no one will exploit me nor posses me Because for him I should live for his sight only.... he locked me and nailed me. prison and in darkness. tony

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Chealsey Marou 18 April 2020

I don't want your idiot repeat comments.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 April 2020

Poignant write. Great imagery. Loved the way you have expressed your feelings. Congrats.

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Chealsey Marou 18 April 2020

You're poignant you idiot.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 April 2020

superb poem penned/ congrats for being selected as POD in the dark sphere of world wind killers are crawling nailing the chaste humanity dying thousands......

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Chealsey Marou 18 April 2020

I don't want your idiot comments.

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Wonderful imagery and allegory.of a life, freedom denied. Congratulations being POD...10

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The Dark One 17 April 2020

I'm everywhere and nowhere. Inhabiting numerous accounts.

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Chealsey Marou 17 April 2020

I know I inhabit dozens of accounts. So what?

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Chinedu Dike 17 April 2020

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Overstated 17 April 2020

And overrated.

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Navod Dilhara 01 December 2019

Your imagination is so grate. Thanks for sharing!

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Grate 17 April 2020

Crates creates!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 18 April 2019

A classic example to how imaginary situation with reaf effects could be used for depicting a thought. Congrats on the well deserved positioning. Exquisitely expressed with simple terms. X

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 April 2019

Congrats A poetic imagery wonderful Chealsey M You may KINDLY read my poem ''MOMS SMILES''

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Chealsey Marou 18 April 2020

You filthy old man pretend ing to be a poet.

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Chealsey Marou 18 April 2020

Your mom worked with me in a brothel.

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Kevin Patrick 17 April 2019

Haunting and vivid, the imagery is powerful conveying the claustrophobia of being captured. A modern gothic elegy. Fantastic choice for poem of the day

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Prabir Gayen 17 April 2019

Beautiful poem.....congratulation

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Chealsey Marou 17 April 2020

It ain't beautiful you fool!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 April 2019

Outside the World! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chealsey Marou 17 April 2020

I'll share nothing with you dear.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 April 2019

A vivid depiction of darkness. Poignant and powerful write. Congratulations !

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Chealsey Marou 17 April 2020

Get out of here you sycophant.

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..........So that no one will exploit me nor posses me. Even death is His mercy for our safety. Thank you and congrats

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Tom Allport 17 April 2019

No escape nowhere to hide this is truly the dark side.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2019

I can smell the disgusting creature Who's standing on top of my tombstone...... he is the one who dragged me.. imagination with power. tony

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Chealsey Marou 18 April 2020

You god forsaken.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Chealsey Marou. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 April 2019

HE The Great Savior, Locked me and nailed me To make sure that I will no longer escape from his hands//////

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Rabbit Ears 17 April 2020

I'll eat you for breakfast.

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Hassan Hayati 17 April 2019

this poem took me to an unknown world, place or thoughts I have never experienced before, this is what the real art does to human, well deserved to be chosen as the poem of the day, congratulations.

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Chealsey Marou

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