I am in beneath of the tomb
Crawling at the edge of the slimy enclosure
I can smell the disgusting creature
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To make sure that I will no longer escape from his hands So that no one will exploit me nor posses me Because for him I should live for his sight only.... he locked me and nailed me. prison and in darkness. tony
Poignant write. Great imagery. Loved the way you have expressed your feelings. Congrats.
superb poem penned/ congrats for being selected as POD in the dark sphere of world wind killers are crawling nailing the chaste humanity dying thousands......
Wonderful imagery and allegory.of a life, freedom denied. Congratulations being POD...10
A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
A classic example to how imaginary situation with reaf effects could be used for depicting a thought. Congrats on the well deserved positioning. Exquisitely expressed with simple terms. X
Congrats A poetic imagery wonderful Chealsey M You may KINDLY read my poem ''MOMS SMILES''
Haunting and vivid, the imagery is powerful conveying the claustrophobia of being captured. A modern gothic elegy. Fantastic choice for poem of the day
Outside the World! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A vivid depiction of darkness. Poignant and powerful write. Congratulations !
..........So that no one will exploit me nor posses me. Even death is His mercy for our safety. Thank you and congrats
I can smell the disgusting creature Who's standing on top of my tombstone...... he is the one who dragged me.. imagination with power. tony
A refined poetic imagination, Chealsey Marou. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
HE The Great Savior, Locked me and nailed me To make sure that I will no longer escape from his hands//////
this poem took me to an unknown world, place or thoughts I have never experienced before, this is what the real art does to human, well deserved to be chosen as the poem of the day, congratulations.
Those comments are not actually mine. Fuck that person who hacked my account. I wasn't opening my account since 2019 after this poem got posted.