Thursday, July 31, 2014

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Tell me a story and just tuck me in,
I haven't slept for ages, you know?
My mind has been tired of an impossible dream,
Running in circles in a wild drift of snow
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Gergana Teofilova
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Bri Edwards 11 July 2016

favorite line so far: You can keep watching the movie but fetch me the map, i like the rhyming, esp. nuts/cold cuts, but may i please see a photo of what you mean here with cold cuts. maybe outset instead of offset? WHAT ARE the demons of blaze and the ghosts, i wonder. ==================================== To The Rescue! ! I am your wished-for hero, riding my steed. To feel insecure, you have no further need. Yes, hold my hand and I'll lull you to sleep, and forever after, from you, harm I shall keep. No more ghosts, no more demons of blaze. You shall be rested, now, in all our future days. bri ;)

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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2014

Nice poem. 'It's not always easy to be the good guy' - So true!

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