Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Crushed Comments

Rating: 5.0

i see the dust encrusted on your eyelids and your once elusive skin hanging over your jutted bones. everything has fallen.
not only our city, but everything in me.

i have seen my family buried under tonnes of bricks- their blood flooding at my feet. my father's skull crushed and my
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chloe young
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Steven S 24 August 2009

Brilliant... you know, brilliant. You took me to the this scene and crushed me too.

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: -) what a sad ending! Well written story, I like it a ton!

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Eric Lopez 04 June 2009

Hey really cool poem.

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