Saturday, June 6, 2015

Crusader Comments

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Here I sit upon this fine white steed,
Somewhere between home and nowhere,
Lost, alone, bereft of friend or foe,
Afraid it is my destiny to wander endlessly
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 07 June 2018

Hey, Suzanne! I wonder what brought this poem on. That aside, I notice, as in other poems of yours, how the speaker’s reflection flows in a steady telling that makes for effortless and bumpless taking in. The crusader is a good choice for the theme. Though it safely puts his words back in time, it definitely reflects the contemporary attitude of those who fight for ideology at the behest of those whose motive is greed. -Glen

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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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