Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, January 30, 2010

Crusade Or Struggle Comments

Rating: 4.7

Where and what place will stop this crusade?
Why have I to make futile attempts to invade?
Hunt for things which is not going to rescue
Which never belonged, never is and or falls due
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Louis Rams 10 February 2010

with hope and prayer and belief in whats right the hypocrasy will disappear and turn out right. we can not live in the valleys of our minds, for when you want to escape there will be no time. it is a crusade to achieve your goal, and it 'll be a struggle or so i'm told.

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Antonio Liao 07 February 2010

a humble endorsement of Life to the world...so beautiful and wanting to hear form this thought of yours.... a feeling to wonder....suite my heart.....thank you fro sharing....God bless....a 10 +++++

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Allemagne Roßmann 04 February 2010

This is a question which should have been answered before the making of Ahmedabad--i don't know its previous name.Must be something in sanskrit.I think the neighbours on the other side of the Rann should answer why they take money from America everytime when they know it is ridiculous to fill their bank accounts even if they get US passports for free. And i think Mr.Modi is a very shrewd personality.He will definitely answer your question.Very good point of view displayed.Contradictory and vindicative but opinion is always opinion.

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Precious Arroyo 31 January 2010

great poem like the way you express the flaws of this world i give this poem a10+++

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 31 January 2010

Crusade or struggle is the way, it seems. Thanks for pointing out the many facets of humanity's lack of humanity.As long as money and power are the gods...its life as usual. hasmukh, as a female, long ago I saw some of the conditions your poem speaks to therefore, I create my own world and have no desire to live in the miseries of the world. Read 'We create our own world'Thanks for inviting me to your site, this is a 10+++>>>>, but my votes do not register for reasons unknown, There's no need to have others validations if one is delighted in his/her own accomplishments.

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Fay Slimm 31 January 2010

Musings on life my friend take us to all sorts of conclusions and this well constructed rhyme is an example of poetic musing around the subject while there is still time.10 from Fay

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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