Crumpled Piece Of Paper Comments

Suicide in love failure. Two contrast pieces of imagery. The depressed and sorrowful state in the world and the Paradise where an Angel awaits your advent. An apt title. The moment of weakness well captured and defined. Thanks for sharing

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

wow, a movie in the making have you not thought of script writing my friend you are very good a poet you have a potential in writing too

This is just lovely..a pain, a sense of sorrow and romance, blended together. Fantastic penning.

It is very nicely written. But some of your poems don't have any hope or strength to move on or live. Like the sentence half empty glass which is a pessimistic definition. I encourage you to write poems on topics which give some thing to think about it, to get a motivation. I am telling this because I feel u r an excellent poet and would love to see some of the poems penned in that way. But still this poem is so brilliant considering the state of mind of the person depicted in the poem.

One of the best pieces I have ever read. Can't express more....

Another beautiful and heartwrenching poem! Im really loving your work, how you write just about how I feel! Bravo here! ! !

The poem is deeply moving with its pathos and pensive tone! A heart rending write!

wow brilliantly written.......so beaiutiful.again great imagery and expressions so beautiful thoughts.....I can distinctly sense your emotions.........very well composed loved it :)

Wow all I can say is Wow......made me cry....brilliant write...keep the pen flowing

The poem is really touching...I could see the man dying in front of me. And it is absolutely not simple.(as u messaged me)

emotionally beautiful...

This is just awesome. I can feel the pain, the sorrow, the dilemma and the words of love expressed. The ending is just too good. Marvellous work!

Thanks for your lovely poem. The sadness grips the heart. I liked the writing. Best wishes.

Beautiful. I thoroughly enjoy your work. The way you string words and emotions together pulls at something inside. Thank you.

loneliness and pathos well brought out

you are well aware of lost world and hopes.its a real fodder for thought.