Monday, June 10, 2013

Cruise Comments

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My love is a cruise
I'm the captain
and she is the most important
passenger on board
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sallam yassin
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 June 2013

Cruise one of the best poem by the poet its a lovely voyage.. Individual is the captain, dependents are the passenger or in other wise more elaborately Cruise the life Self the captain and all are passengers lovely write with the universal call

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Wahab Abdul 10 June 2013

very nice thought.. credit to you for the idea..

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Gajanan Mishra 10 June 2013

destination is fine, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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