Cruelty Of Life Comments

well done. u write so well. maybe others dont understand ur side of things but I can see your side of it. its really clear through your poem how u see things. keep writing and soon the world will see how messed up it is.

its beautiful, nice job (lindo cara, tem uns erros de digitação, mas ta bem expressivo)

I could feel your feelings through your piece, well done

wud just sum up in 1 word..'gr8'..

i thought this poem was very sad. but it is great that you can at least identify that life is not all fun. as long as you know that, then it might start to get better.

It is such a beautiful poem, Alex. Very emotional and truthful. Thank you for letting us read it :) xx Mary

Lovely poetry, Alex, to say the least, but I have to wonder at what price. Paul.

This poem rings in every line with truth. Beautifully written. The world truly is cruel and is getting worse every day. I love that you acknowledge the pain and cruelty of no one understanding. Good write! ~Lacey~

Great poem there Alex. I really enjoyed reading it.But it does seem as if this world is going towards cruelty and terror each day. Horrible well gotta jet ttyl!

I also feel the same way as you feel. What to do? The world is going towards cruelty and terror day by day.

That dicrides how so many feel! ! i think itz realy good how you can put soo much emotion in to the words of this poem! ! its brilliant :)