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deep and affectionate write, a mirror for human beings reminding humanity, in this age of world-wide blood shed.

‘Phenomenon of Mortality Inevitable virtual Inevitability Alias Reality We’re Puppet Forget Why surrogate And invite Regret? ’ ~ niv PS…it’s Poetic diction…but feel the bereavement emphatically. Excellent poem Sir! 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

I feel the kindness in this poem, I think one of your most compassionate poems. i rather count myself a 'humanist' these days, somewhat disillusioned by how all religions except Buddhism seems to be being exploited - but that's nobody's fault exactly as human beings for the most part are doing the best they can, including me, to lead the good life. So i understand or think I do the way you are using humanist in your poem, the way it is practiced rather than the ideal, the same way as religion is used, though really most people mean well in their religions also. Perhaps it's because, as Krishnamurti implies, we rely on belief rather than use beliefs as stepping stones This is a warm poem, I think, a warm-hearted poem. To me, a Humanist poem.

A very descriptive and thought provoking poem.. you arouses the reader's mind's eye.. good one to broaden ones horizons... lovess shan

''mist of dawn happens to disown truth by black curtain of wild fear of night cry of innocence rumbles at criss-cross gleaning tears to eyes at grave yard'' It is a way to accentuate beauty as well as pain through this metaphoric poem......10+++++

Didactic literature.Good form of humanity.

where is the mankind lost in delusion as illusion pervades by dogmas of religion....... cruelty perpetuated by one or anotehr method... very good writesir.....10 feeling little better

lots of truth packed with. good poem sir

love and hate hv been the prime subject of poetry but the way u hv treated cruelty with the use of yr art and pizzazz is commendable! i admire the way u hv questioned the humanity in so subtle a manner. gud work -i truly enjoyed though i had to read it over for the full impact of yr words to set in.

Very well written. Good job :)

Cruelty is the order of the day for some kind of fundamental religion. But there are religions of tolerance still on this earth on account of which the world survives though part of it is in trouble always due to wars in the name of religion. A fine piece of work by the poet indeed!

A good poem. Usage of wording is very very good. It has a deep meaning. Good work. Loved it.

Informative and thought provoking deep poem. thanks for the invite.... J. l. Price.

From : Ashley Perez (chicago United States; Female; 17) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 5/22/2009 12: 10: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) it was rly good...i liked it

Dear Dr. Subhendu Kar Well written poem with a sense of time. Good vocabulary and imagination. May be you can give a little attention to punctuation and Capital letters after fullstop? Just a suggestion. Greetings Satheesan Rangorath

You described well the most dreaded word in the dictionary 'Cruelty'. The word is all over the world since immemorial time, you can't deny that. Wonderful piece of work you got there particularly the words used. Thanks

nice and thought provoking poem. thanks i am busy with my exams now. will catch up later.

Very wise, suggestive piece of poetry. One can read much into it. Wonderful use of language. Good write. I enjoyed it.

very nice and sweet poem