Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Cruel Twist Of Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

How cruel is fate?
Allowing me to know you
To feel your heart, to cup your pain
To pick you up when you fall down
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Michelle Tiddy
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Jerry Hughes 23 March 2007

...welcome Michelle, you've made an immediate impression, well done indeed

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An eloquent, elegant piece that invokes all the reader's sense.... sublime to read. t x

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Marci Made 21 March 2007

I can feel this one Em and it's written so beautifully.........you know my take on it...that sometime we just have to wait and believe that something in 'fate' will turn the key and see and meet our need........this is another that touches the heartstrings of many..............marci :)

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Declan McHenry 21 March 2007

Michelle, a grand and insightful work indeed. Excellently rendered.

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David Taylor 21 March 2007

Ohh how I feel for you, you and your lover cleft in two, by cyberspace that's joining you, but not the way you want it to! Love form David, GREAT poem.

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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