Cruel Joke Comments

wow where I come from we call some one like that a (BITCH) no offence to any ladys out there but she is another good one Super

I''m increasingly taken that your powerful emotions are expressed so vividly and within such a flowing structure. Superb.

Wow, Mary, I'm shocked - some strong words for you. Deep breath...exhale. :) Isn't poetry therapeutic? And it's free!

This is about a woman that married my brother after convincing him it would be forever....it lasted around 3 weeks. She just decided she 'couldn't do it'. To me, this is cruel. My other poem 'To Ray and Chris' was what I wrote for them when he told me they were getting married...................Mary

Hey Mary this is very strong and says it how it is

wow! ! ! I like how you write what you feel -Shell

Strong stuff, well put. H

Simply put, -'Powerful'! ! !

love is a three minute song............but not for me........