Friday, February 18, 2005

Cruel Joke Comments

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Was it just a cruel joke
or did you feel the same?
How could you kill a grown man's soul?
Why did you play this game?
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Mary Nagy
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Kia Seales 29 March 2006

wow where I come from we call some one like that a (BITCH) no offence to any ladys out there but she is another good one Super

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I''m increasingly taken that your powerful emotions are expressed so vividly and within such a flowing structure. Superb.

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Lori Boulard 08 October 2005

Wow, Mary, I'm shocked - some strong words for you. Deep breath...exhale. :) Isn't poetry therapeutic? And it's free!

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Mary Nagy 09 September 2005

This is about a woman that married my brother after convincing him it would be forever....it lasted around 3 weeks. She just decided she 'couldn't do it'. To me, this is cruel. My other poem 'To Ray and Chris' was what I wrote for them when he told me they were getting married...................Mary

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Don Stratford 05 September 2005

Hey Mary this is very strong and says it how it is

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Michelle Pope 11 August 2005

wow! ! ! I like how you write what you feel -Shell

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Herbert Nehrlich1 27 May 2005

Strong stuff, well put. H

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Richard A. Davis SR. 26 April 2005

Simply put, -'Powerful'! ! !

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David Gerardino 31 March 2005

love is a three minute song............but not for me........

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