Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Cruel Destiny Comments

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Cruel destiny that cursed me
To the sky I’m wondering
How could it be?
Without love do I have to live?
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Michael Vinicio Camacho Menéndez
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Indira Renganathan 07 February 2010

What a pity.........God bless

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Jen Ann Wingfield 06 February 2008

i like this one, this has good flow and rythmn to it. great job!

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Carike Klokow 06 February 2008

I like this one very much!

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Jessica Jemima 06 February 2008

Great poem. I like your use of metaphor. Cool.

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Love is cruel, your verse helps us understand how this can be true. I'm glad I got a chance to read this poem. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

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