Tuesday, January 10, 2017

Cruel Day Cruel Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

the morning star is shining in the east
and still I grieve the rising sun
for night is almost done
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 13 January 2017

Yes, indeed for some there is no relief whether it's day or night. I like how you have equated sunrise with reality n pain, though mostly sunrise means hope n light. And i agree that the sleep brings relief to many despite the darkness. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 13 January 2017

Thanks Nosheen. Reality can be painful especially for people who not only have our own pain to deal with but an acute awareness of all the suffering in our world.

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