Sunday, September 20, 2009

Cruel Comments

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Why can’t you look at me?
Why can’t you see?
These tears that glisten
So shamelessly
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Pondering Portrait
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Alex Gomez 04 October 2009

Excellent! you're beginning to incorporate rhyming into your poems! An bold step into a new direction with limitless horizons.

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Stephan Mclean 27 September 2009

Really good write...I like your poems! !

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