Crowded Rooms. Comments
Crowded rooms filled with lonely lives
fancy talk in perfumed air
rich men laugh poor men cry
someone sings a lullaby.
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b g. I like this. You don't force the rhymes and distort the meaning. I think the poem would be sronger without that too-abstract and mildly cliched line crowded rooms…. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC
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7/19/2025 5:24:34 AM # 1.0.0
True that greed is a curse. Thanks.