Monday, May 12, 2008

Crowded Room Comments

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In a crowded room, and yet all alone
In a fog of doom, wish I had known
You'd leave so soon, it's me you've outgrown
I don't know where or what I'm looking for,
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chad fisher
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Barbara Smith 12 May 2008

Very well written. Expresses pain in a real way that can be easily understood. Nice, nice.

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