Crowded Room Comments

Nice work.. In a crowded room I do believe we all see so much sometimes it can be overwhelming.. Crazy too.. Great poem Krista

Very well done. Only the last two lines I think could be possibly somewhere else in the poem. The stanza above it seemed to me it finished the poem. But hey your poems are all wonderfully made! ! !

Very wistful and poignant. I hope that you find your friend again one day. Kind regards, Sandra

brother, this piece brought tears to my eyes. it is as if you wrote it for me. ther eis this one young lady that had blessed my life briefly. we had become good friends, then she just disappeared. she goes to my school and i too search every room to see if her i can find. thank you.

Lovely way of saying things. God Bless, gave it a TEN! Cause your old and I like you! LOL Linda