Saturday, January 26, 2013

Crow Comments

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Black as night
You sound above my window
Arriving at first light
Many a tale has been written for the crow
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Patricia Gale
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Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2015

Not many people have written poems on this not so beautiful bird, but like you, I too have written one. The name of my poem is 'Thoughts Spun Around A Nest' and here are the first two stanzas: A crow is not the cutest thing to see, It hardly holds any fascination for me. Still I despise it not from my heart, As I find it clever, alert and smart. Just the other day I saw one of them, In search of dried leaves as it came, To my backyard's line of shedding trees, And pulled out yarns from dried out twigs. ''But none see you as I do' - you are very right. You have described it as no one else has done it before.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 September 2014

Aha the crow, black and unattractive yet has other charms, cleverness and sharpness. I too hav an unposted poem on crows so i enjoyd yor lovely cool poem. Do pls review my latest poem too.

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