Thursday, April 7, 2005

Crotch Rocket Comments

Rating: 3.9

i was jealous, but i don’t know why
perhaps it was because i felt emasculated,
picturing you on the back of that crotch rocket
tightly hugging his denim-clad middle-aged belly trying
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler
COMMENTS
Anna Russell 14 March 2007

Well, if she's that shallow then she'll soon get sick of the motorcycle helmet messing up her hair, so don't sweat it! A really enjoyable write Jake, wry, bittersweet and touching. Hugs Anna xxx

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 28 July 2006

awww! you are my latest husband now. cuz i love your poems so much. you're really helping me understand the male species. and hey, i think its cute when guys have a baby seat in their car. don't feel sad. :) babies are the best way to strike up a conversation with someone. seriously.

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Max Reif 19 October 2005

really vivid, honest pictures, Jake, held my acute interest all the way through.

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Rich Hanson 08 April 2005

I enjoyed this poem, Jake. You expressed the feelings that I've felt as well as I slid into married life and relative conformity.

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kenneth william snow 07 April 2005

Catch that wave Jake...and ride it for all your worth. Kenneth

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