He sees you pretending not to look
And asks
“Do I tick all the boxes? ”
Well now let’s see
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Guilty David. I love how you write about everyday life experiences Might I say without offending; O) you are such a sponge. You soak up the world around you and with a little twist you come up with such beautiful flowing verse Always a 10
should say in line not [lie] oooopppssssssssss a daisy! ! ! ! ! !
What an entertaining read....don't have subways in my town, buses on main rd. not here in neighborhoods so i don't get to peek...But, in the book stores, I always try to see what people in lie are buying and I love to people watch in Starbucks, especially the babies....great poem David.......[gave me a laugh as I sit here doing bills] ~~~marci.m.xo
David...Public transportation is one of my favorite places to watch people! Nicely done! Hugs, Dee
I really liked this one! Maybe because we are all guilty of the same secret, sly looks at others, and at the books they are reading...hoping, maybe, to find a fellow poetry lover? ? ? Good for a laugh or two, and yet right to the point of our behaviour!
A regular laughing track David. Neatly done. But with some iron thoughts within the velvet glove. There are some insightful questions here. Respect.
Or did she watch you, with your pen. Wondering what you wrote, just then. If she knew, she’d be surprised, Your gift? She’s been immortalised.