Monday, June 4, 2007

Crosswalk Comments

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If the world were a crosswalk
two straight white lines
telling us
to live our lives
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Leila Ired
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Alfredo Jacques 04 June 2007

wow great poem very philosophical. thank you for sharing

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Ivan Donn Carswell 04 June 2007

Alira, you have nailed this piece with admirable economy. It leaves the reader astonished - and pondering... Always a sign of good poetry. Rgds, Ivan

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