Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Crossroads In Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

There comes a time when decisions have to be made
Decisions that will affect the rest of our lives
There comes a time when we have to take a long hard look at ourselves
And ask ourselves 'what now'.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 30 March 2009

Beautifully and sensitively written. The line length makes the reader slow down and take in the words. I feel almost as though I should not be intruding into private pain - and yet you invite me to, as though by sharing, it can be somehow diminished. Thank you for this June.

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Daryl Young 24 March 2009

Interesting, having to make the change, because of what the other person in your life was doing. Thank you, please feel free to read and comment on my works. Rabbit

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