Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Crossing The Street Comments

Rating: 5.0

You outside the stadium with your hat held in your hand
Don't apologize for your begging. I will try and understand

Your wheelchair so worn, your shirt stained and torn
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Edmund Strolis
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Unnikrishnan E S 05 May 2016

Hi Edmund, This is the first poem of your that I happened to read. More thank the change of those passing by You crave humanity from those who look into your eyes. But in today's world, nobody looks into the eyes of the other. Even if one does, can you see humane feeling in them? Great poetry. Overwhelming feelings. Keep writing and thank you sharing.

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Sarah Persson 03 May 2016

How often would we just walk past a man like this because all we would see is the upside down hat, Splendid poem.

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